Create A Software for Improving My English

Jan 1, 2015 22:44
Have your made your New Year's resolutions?

This year, I'm going to improve my English in earnest.

So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.

The only one software specification is to support the dictation of foreign dramas.

Once I prepare the subtitles of foreign dramas, It will become possible to train my hearing ability by typing dictation practice.

The development hasn't finished yet, but it's expected to be completed tomorrow.

I'm looking forward to using the software and watching foreign dramas. :)

No. 1　Scrugs's correction
  • Have your made your New Year's resolutions?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This year, I'm going to improve my English in earnest.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.
  • So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.So todat, I began to create software (a program) to help me study
    　you could say either "software" or "a program". My studying is not wrong but " me study" is better
  • The only one software specification is to support the dictation of foreign dramas.
  • The only software specification is to support the dictation of foreign dramas.
    　plays is better than dramas
  • Once I prepare the subtitles of foreign dramas, It will become possible to train my hearing ability by typing dictation practice.
  • Once I have prepared the subtitles of foreign dramas, It will be possible to train my hearing ability by typing dictation practice.
  • The development hasn't finished yet, but it's expected to be completed tomorrow.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm looking forward to using the software and watching foreign dramas.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
very interesting, good luck!
kanotown
Thank you so much for your correction!!
I'll do my best. (^-^)
No. 2　Yansen's correction
  • Create A Software for Improving My English
  • Creating a Software Program for Improving My English
    　In English, "software" is an uncountable noun, so we cannot use "a/an", which is only for singular countable nouns. Note that in some other languages, "software" is a countable noun, such as Italian. This is why some foreign speakers incorrectly use "software" as a countable noun in English. (Hearing "a software" is actually very weird for long time English speakers, so it does matter a lot.)

    We can also write "Creating Software for Improving My English". :)
  • Have your made your New Year's resolutions?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This year, I'm going to improve my English in earnest.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.
  • So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.
  • The only one software specification is to support the dictation of foreign dramas.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Once I prepare the subtitles of foreign dramas, It will become possible to train my hearing ability by typing dictation practice.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The development hasn't finished yet, but it's expected to be completed tomorrow.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm looking forward to using the software and watching foreign dramas.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • :)
  • :)
    　(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
kanotown
Thank you so much for your correction!
I've learned another thing.٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Yansen
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No. 3　Timmy's correction
  • So today, I began to create a software to help my studying.
  • So today, I began to create software to help my studying (or: studies).
kanotown
Thank you so much for your correction!! (*´▽｀*)
Timmy
You are welcome!
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